There is a couple that I would rather not remember, for a very good reason. There is this woman who is a bit creepy. Her name is Betsy. She does her mascara in a very odd way. 
The other one he has been called Salad Fingers from time to time. He runs a cafe and sells horrible pies for a living. I wonder what he puts in those pies........And that my friend that is the story of BILLY AND BETSY!
Kia ora Freya. I really enjoyed reading your short story. You chose descriptive words which helped me, the reader, imagine what the characters would be like to meet in person. Scary! Well done. Remember to use school appropriate language and ideas when story writing. I have edited your writing to help you with this. I am looking forward to reading your next story. Keep blogging your learning Freya!
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DeleteYou really are the BEST teacher IN THE WOLD!
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